Rose, Loers, Long
5 March, 2004
First Draft, Essay #1
For the Author:
What is your primary purpose in this essay?
On what aspects of your draft would you most appreciate feedback?
For the Peer:
(Feel free to write comments on the draft as well as on this form)
What is your overall response to the draft?
What suggestions do you have for organization? What parts could be developed or condensed?
What questions do you have for the author?
Please respond to any issues the author highlighted above.